: If you haven't read Avah Maldita (Aarte Pa?) yet, the author strongly recommends finishing Book 1 first, as the sequel picks up right where the drama left off. Avah Maldita: Review - stories of ddunoticedsgrl
Check for consistency in the curse's rules and ensure the secondary characters have their own arcs, like Elya's redemption or Azrael's betrayal. Balance action scenes with character development. Maybe include some dialogue between Avah and Elya to explore the theme of trust after past betrayal. Make sure the setting is vivid, perhaps a mystical village surrounded by dangerous forests.
